一、了解对比观点型作文的出题形式和写作要领

A. 对比观点出题形式:

一般出题形式有两种:

常见的作文题目:

1)

1.有人认为读书要有选择

2.有人认为应当博览群书

3.我的看法

Reading Selectively Or Extensively?

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are being published every day. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books, and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.

But others may not agree. They emphasize that today's society is not what is used to be. If you want to be successful, you must read widely and acquire knowledge in both natural sciences and humanities, if a man knows much in one field but little in others, he may not be of great use to the society. Since we must have a wide range of knowledge, we must read extensively.

Who's right? There is a lot to be said for both sides of the argument. However, I think we should read extensively first and then dig into the subject we are interested in.


2)表格类:你们学校在高三年级实行周考,每周有四门考试,同学们对此有不同意见。请你根据下表提供的信息给校刊编辑写一封信,客观地介绍情况,并谈谈你的看法。

70%的同学认为

30%的同学认为

1.考试考得太多,占用大量上新课的时间

1.为对付高考,高三学生需要大量考试

2.学生们为考试经常熬夜,身体疲乏

2.考试可督促学生用功复习

3.建议将周考改为月考

3.不应该取消周考

Dear Editor,

Since the beginning of this term, the Senior Three Students of our school have had four exams every week. They have recently had a discussion about whether these exams are necessary or not.

Opinions are divided on the question.70% of the students are against this arrangement. They think that they have too many exams. These exams occupy lots of lecture time which should be devoted to learning new lessons. The students have to stay up late preparing for the exams. They feel so tired that they often fall asleep in the classroom. They suggest that they have exams monthly instead of weekly.

On the other hand, 30% of the students think that in order to be well prepared for the college entrance exams, the Senior Three students ought to be examined often enough. They serve as a pressure forcing students to work hard. They hold the view

that the weekly exams shouldn’t be done away with.

I believe this discussion is important, and hope our teachers can also enter into it so as to help our principal make a correct decision.

Yours truly,

Zhuang Qi

B.了解对比观点型作文的写作要领

1.写作要求

对比观点型作文通常是对同一事物进行两个方面的对比,在此基础之上表明自己对问题和事物的态度和看法。

2.篇章结构

第一段:引出主题,对要评价的事物进行支持A观点的阐述

第二段:对要评价的事物进行支持B观点的阐述

第三段:表明自己的观点和结论

3.写作套路------万能模版 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1.有一些人认为。。。 2.另一些人认为。。。 3.我的看法。。。There is a widespread concern over the issue that________(作文题目)But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. (开头一般题目给出) The majority think that________(观点一). First of all,________(原因一).Furthermore, ________(原因二). So it goes without saying that________(观点一).

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the view that________(观点二). On the one hand,________(原因一). On the other hand,________(原因二). Therefore, there is no doubt that ________(观点二)

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because ________(原因一), but also because ________.(原因二)It's high time that________. (喊口号) Only in this way eventually can we ________(支持这一观点的结果)

4.常用有用句型:

句型…展现问题

① Along with the advance of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that------

② As society develops, people are attaching much importance to------

③ When it comes to ------

④ Nowadays, wherever you go, you will find------

⑤ Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.

句型…引出不同观点

① people’s view on ------vary from person to person. Some hold that------. However, others believe that------

② when asked------some people think------while some prefer

③ At present, some people think------while others claim------. Both sides have their merits.

④ About this issue, some people take a different attitude towards------

句型---总结个人观点

① As far as I am concerned, I am inclines to be on the side of the latter view

② Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to favor the latter one

③ In my opinion, I prefer that ------

二、能力检测

【1】

1.各地博物馆免费开放后,社会反应不一。

2. 有人支持认为是利民之举,让百姓享受基本权利

3. 也有人反对认为它会带来麻烦

4. 作为高中生,你的观点是……

范文赏析:

Should Museums be open free to the public?

Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as there's a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society. Only with free access to this live 'database' , can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them. Some think that museums should be open to public because it'll benefit us a lot. We should have the right to enjoy visiting them. For paying visit to, for example, art museum, science museum, history museum can make us better understand these things of our country. To some extent, it can improve our knowledge of many fields.

However, others don't agree. They think that museums being open to the public may cause a lot of trouble, for people there may damage the displays without doing it on purpose. And the exhibitions can't be taken good care of free admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden . As a result, our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control. On the other hand, free admission attracts too many visitors, some of which might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.

As a senior high school university student, I am in favor of the free—admission conduct. Yet it is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some 'closed' days for museums for regular maintenance. Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.

分析:文章第一段:第一句话引出主题,日益增长的博物馆开放,并用“some think that museums should be open to public because it'll benefit us a lot.”引出第一个观点觉得是利民之举,然后进行论述

第二段:第一句话“However, others don't agree. They think that museums being open to the public may cause a lot of trouble,”引出第二个观点认为他会造成很多麻烦,然后进行论述

第三段:第一句话“As a senior high school university student, I am in favor of the free—admission conduct”亮明作者的观点,是赞成博物馆开放

【作文句式总结】

1. 倒装的灵活使用

①Only with free access to this live 'database' , can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.

②Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.

2.连词的有效使用:On the other hand, 使得文章有逻辑性

Apart from what I talked above, it’s known to us that these qualities play an significant role in our present study and future career.

3.it is句型的灵活使用: It is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For example,.

【2】你们学校在高三年级实行周考,每周有四门考试,同学们对此有不同意见。请你根据下表提供的信息给校刊编辑写一封信,客观地介绍情况。

70%的同学认为

30%的同学认为

1.考试考得太多,占用大量上新课的时间

1.为对付高考,高三学生需要大量考试

2.学生们为考试经常熬夜,身体疲乏

2.考试可督促学生用功复习

3.建议将周考改为月考

3.不应该取消周考

范文赏析:

Dear Editor,

Since the beginning of this term, the Senior Three Students of our school have had four exams every week. They have recently had a discussion about whether these exams are necessary or not.

Opinions are divided on the question.70% of the students are against this arrangement. They think that they have too many exams. These exams occupy lots of lecture time which should be devoted to learning new lessons. Besides,the students have to stay up late preparing for the exams. So tired do they feel that they often fall asleep in the classroom. They suggest that they have exams monthly instead of weekly.

On the other hand, 30% of the students think that in order to be well prepared for the college entrance exams, the Senior Three students ought to be examined often enough. In addition,they serve as a pressure forcing students to work hard. So they hold the view that the weekly exams shouldn’t be done away with.

I believe this discussion is important, and hope our teachers can also enter into it so as to help our principal make a correct decision.

Yours truly,

Zhuang Qi

作文句式总结学习:

1. 定语从句的有效使用:These exams occupy lots of lecture time which should be devoted to learning new lessons.

2 .倒装的自如使用:So tired do they feel that they often fall asleep in the classroom. They suggest that they have exams monthly instead of weekly.

3.非谓语做定语的运用;They serve as a pressure forcing students to work hard.

4.常用句型:

句型…展现问题

① Along with the advance of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that------

② As society develops, people are attaching much importance to------

③ When it comes to ------

④ Nowadays, wherever you go, you will find------

⑤ Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people’s attitude towards some traditional practice.

句型…引出不同观点

① people’s view on ------vary from person to person. Some hold that------. However, others believe that------

② when asked------some people think------while some prefer

③ At present, some people think------while others claim------. Both sides have their merits.

④ About this issue, some people take a different attitude towards------

句型---总结个人观点

① As far as I am concerned, I am inclines to be on the side of the latter view

② Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to favor the latter one

③ In my opinion, I prefer that ------

【方法总结】

在写对比观点型作文的时候要注意分为三段,第一段:引出主题,对要评价的事物进行支持A观点的阐述;第二段:对要评价的事物进行支持B观点的阐述;第三段:表明自己的观点和结论,这样层次分明,有逻辑性,并注意常用的句型运用。最重要的是每阐述一种观点时都要写分论点和论据,来支撑你的观点,这样才有说服力。

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